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-The grammar needs work; run-ons are the main issue.

-The roadmap doesn't specify what trophies you'll get when you complete each step. It doesn't need to be entirely inclusive, but people don't even know what they're going for when they read your steps.

-The guide is extremely thin. What car is the best? What are all the settings that can be adjusted? What are tricks to beating the computer? There will be some people who will have problems with raving games.

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